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    Default "This My Life" By SHiiFT

    For whatever I reason I couldn't fall asleep do I stayed up (Its currently 5:42am in Indy) and finished this. I hope you enjoy. Recorded version coming soon.



    [Intro]@0:00
    After everything we've been through together, Your still telling me what to do. But I'm only gonna say this once, I make my own choices.
    This is my life.
    [/intro]

    [Verse 1]@0:11
    Love isn't worthless,
    You feel it like the first kiss,
    I'd give it all away,
    Just to know I'm under gods bliss.

    They were there for me,
    But you were way to scared to be,
    My only loving friend who risked it all to be right there with me.

    But show me what you see,
    What am I supposed to be,
    Put my life together, its a puzzle, crazy mystery.

    So leave it up to me,
    I'm choosin my own destiny,
    Decisions make up who we are,
    You bringing out the best of thee.
    [/Verse 1]

    [Chorus]@0:33
    Tell me what's good,
    Tell me what's right,
    I only tell you one time,
    This my life. [Echo 1x] "This my life."

    And we gone shout it out,
    Its time we show everybody just what we talkin bout.

    Tell me what's good,
    Tell me what's right,
    I only tell you one time,
    This my life. [Echo 1x ] "This my life."

    And we gone shout it out,
    Its time I show these haters
    exactly what I'm talkin bout.
    [Repeat x2]
    [/Chorus]

    //added verse 2 from other post.
    [Verse 2]@1:15
    Love your life a little,
    Inside you die a lot,
    You got real friends,
    Keep em close, they're all you've got

    You got 1 friend,
    That will not betray you,
    Its name is music.
    Its a game, but will it neva play you.

    It always listens,
    Tries to lend a hand,
    I'm puttin music at the top,
    But you don't understand.

    You never understand,
    You couldn't comprehend,
    We holdin out against each other up until the end

    But lies will never end,
    They stay with us foreva,
    They say it gets worse,
    Before it starts gettin betta

    I've been there dude,
    Stay within the light,
    Before you know it,
    Night is over, please turn out the lights

    But I don't wanna fight,
    Not tonight baby,
    I make my own decisions,
    Everything you sayin's crazy.

    What's your problem then,
    You wanna stay an fight,
    Find another man,
    Its me, and this is my life
    [/Verse 2]...

    [Chorus 2x]
    [Outro....]

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    Ummm who's farhan khan? That's a muslim name. And you're not muslim. Or did you just make the lyrics

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    You forgot to add that you always pussyout.

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    Disclaimer: There's nothing personal in my response, just observations from a music lover.

    The lyrics are very simple, I don't feel much depth at all. I don't feel much flow either, but maybe I'm just reading it differently than you sing it.

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    Nice story lol put me 2 sleep

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    f*** u guys for hatin you guys probably couldn't write a song for your life so get of his back. great job shiift u should make a recording of you singing it.

    bro ever since i posted the last comment, i have been beatboxing the instrumental. again, great job bro

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    I can. I'm a known singer and rapper in my school

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    Quote Originally Posted by [BMH]COOLness View Post
    I can. I'm a known singer and rapper in my school
    Hmm, You must be home schooled than.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vanidoso View Post
    Hmm, You must be home schooled than.
    It wouldnt be a school if I was home schooled ;)

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    Quote Originally Posted by HomeBoyMarine1 View Post
    bro ever since i posted the last comment, i have been beatboxing the instrumental. again, great job bro
    Meanwhile shiift comments on his own post with a different account.

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