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    Default Which one of these rap lines is better?

    1. "I'm not here to claim my fame cuz i ain't got no fame to claim. All these otha niggas lame, so imma step in tha game."-Me
    2. "I'm not here to claim my fame cuz i ain't got no fame to claim. All these otha niggas lame, so imma step in tha game, cuz you know i don't spit tha same."-Me

    3. "I'm not here to claim my fame cuz i ain't got no fame to claim. All these otha niggas sound tha same and act so lame, so imma step in tha game even as a no name with no shame cuz i already aimed, and i ain't tha one to blame for all tha shit that happened in yoe life cuz imma just make it happen again."-Me

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    should i take that part out?

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    Raps gay.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCrimsoNx View Post
    Raps gay.
    You gay.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xCrimsoNx View Post
    Raps gay.
    Amen.

    Although it does rhyme.
    The unnecessary curses are dumb.

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    Both those lines were mad lame. Stop rapping cause you're never gonna reach the fame. I'd finish you off but I'd rather leave it to James.

    Hopefully James will read this thread and teach you a few things .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Slave View Post
    Both those lines were mad lame. Stop rapping cause you're never gonna reach the fame. I'd finish you off but I'd rather leave it to James.

    Hopefully James will read this thread and teach you a few things .
    Doesn't matter what you do, but you start at a beginner before an expert.
    Keep rapping.

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    No, you won't get anywhere. Since you used the word nigga. Listen to Eminem and you'll find he doesn't use that word.

    Stop trying.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PVT.Money View Post
    No, you won't get anywhere. Since you used the word nigga. Listen to Eminem and you'll find he doesn't use that word.

    Stop trying.
    So...
    Everybody must rap like Eminem to be successful?
    (nigga is just a word. Nothing more, nothing less.)

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    Quote Originally Posted by CheeseToast View Post
    So...
    Everybody must rap like Eminem to be successful?
    (nigga is just a word. Nothing more, nothing less.)
    Saying 'Nigga' just shows how low your vocab is. By listening to Eminem you hear a range of vocab, same with 2pac, BIG, and some underground hip-hop(Immortal Technique and Jedi Mind Tricks)

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    Quote Originally Posted by PVT.Money View Post
    Saying 'Nigga' just shows how low your vocab is. By listening to Eminem you hear a range of vocab, same with 2pac, BIG, and some underground hip-hop(Immortal Technique and Jedi Mind Tricks)
    Nigga please.

    Nah but seriously...
    Your kinda right in a sense. But I don't think their is a rulebook on how to rap. Just cause you say nigga doesn't mean you wont be successful. Not saying being successful is easy either.

    Personally I hate Eminem. Well, I liked the old school Eminem. Like my name is and slim shady.
    All his shit now is slow, and has a sad meaning/tune.

    I like energetic rap.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r0czvrWVWL0

    Skip to 6:20

    (YouTube video shit isn't working)
    But I like it, and it's not professional at all. The world
    doesn't revolve around professional.

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