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10-08-2012, 07:40 AM #1
Which one of these rap lines is better?
1. "I'm not here to claim my fame cuz i ain't got no fame to claim. All these otha niggas lame, so imma step in tha game."-Me
2. "I'm not here to claim my fame cuz i ain't got no fame to claim. All these otha niggas lame, so imma step in tha game, cuz you know i don't spit tha same."-Me
3. "I'm not here to claim my fame cuz i ain't got no fame to claim. All these otha niggas sound tha same and act so lame, so imma step in tha game even as a no name with no shame cuz i already aimed, and i ain't tha one to blame for all tha shit that happened in yoe life cuz imma just make it happen again."-Me
The finished one:
should i take that part out?
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10-08-2012, 07:42 AM #2
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10-08-2012, 07:44 AM #3
10-08-2012, 07:44 AM #4
10-08-2012, 07:59 AM #5
Both those lines were mad lame. Stop rapping cause you're never gonna reach the fame. I'd finish you off but I'd rather leave it to James.
Hopefully James will read this thread and teach you a few things .
10-08-2012, 08:24 AM #6
10-08-2012, 08:30 AM #7
No, you won't get anywhere. Since you used the word nigga. Listen to Eminem and you'll find he doesn't use that word.
10-08-2012, 08:33 AM #8
10-08-2012, 08:36 AM #9
10-08-2012, 08:39 AM #10
Nah but seriously...
Your kinda right in a sense. But I don't think their is a rulebook on how to rap. Just cause you say nigga doesn't mean you wont be successful. Not saying being successful is easy either.
Personally I hate Eminem. Well, I liked the old school Eminem. Like my name is and slim shady.
All his shit now is slow, and has a sad meaning/tune.
I like energetic rap.
Skip to 6:20
(YouTube video shit isn't working)
But I like it, and it's not professional at all. The world
doesn't revolve around professional.
Last edited by CheeseToast; 10-08-2012 at 08:48 AM.