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    Default Still not done wanna make it perfect(slave please?)

    Please tell me I want to make it perfect. added text and a few more details in blur. gave it my logo and a few more things that you probably cant see Rate and give me a full review one that will sound like the ones magazine critics make

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    That's a stock that needs work. There is nothing on it expect sharpening.

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    I didnt Sharpen lol

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    Remove everything you have going on in the background. It's distracting. Add a nice medieval stock and just blur it. Idk what else you can do cause quite frankly my mind is in bed and yeah. But what I think you can do is start to focus on the focal and just do something. I'd personally keep it simple.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GamerProblems View Post
    That's a stock that needs work. There is nothing on it expect sharpening.
    i just trolled u this proves you just want to give bad reviews

    Quote Originally Posted by Slave View Post
    Remove everything you have going on in the background. It's distracting. Add a nice medieval stock and just blur it. Idk what else you can do cause quite frankly my mind is in bed and yeah. But what I think you can do is start to focus on the focal and just do something. I'd personally keep it simple.
    and yes slave ill see what i can do

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    Work on the text placement a little bit, that seems to kill it. Should put it where the eyes are going to catch the image at first glimpse, but don't make it too big.

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    In my opinion the render looks huge. Try making it smaller?

    And what Iced said.

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    Render is too big, almost never sharpen your image either.

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