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    Default Another Try.

    Im getting a tad bit rusty. Gonna start watching some tutorials im gonna look at PSDs.
    Actually Cnc on it. I like the flow on it ?/10!

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    Right side looks empty, add more stuff or just center the render. Text sucks, try making the text color purple or just try a different font.

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    I can barely see the render.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RudeDirector View Post
    I can barely see the render.
    This.
    my eyes keep wanting to go to that bright spot in the center.

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    Default Another Try.

    Composition is ruined, focal is too far left. Random effect in the middle? Definitely shouldn't be there. Ummm, move the render towards the middle more and make it a little bigger; scale wise. Lower the opacity of the effects you have on the render and yeah. About it for now .

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    I think I might of over blended it. I dont know what I could do to fill it.

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