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    Bad color for name. Work on your text placement. 6/10

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    You can barely read the text, try improving on it.
    Try adding a light source at the bottom, it's too dark on the bottom left.
    Try placing those Bubble Effects somewhere else, or maybe just duplicate it add more of those and erase the ones you don't like ?
    Grab the sharpen tool and sharpen the render a bit, make the render "Pop-out" more.
    You smudged his left fist a little too much.
    Probably best to take of the border since you can barely see it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by JROD707 View Post
    You can barely read the text, try improving on it.
    Try adding a light source at the bottom, it's too dark on the bottom left.
    Try placing those Bubble Effects somewhere else, or maybe just duplicate it add more of those and erase the ones you don't like ?
    Grab the sharpen tool and sharpen the render a bit, make the render "Pop-out" more.
    You smudged his left fist a little too much.
    Probably best to take of the border since you can barely see it.

    6/10
    Ok Thanks Ill add some of those changes later!

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    Nice man, the hand is covered to much and the left side is a bit to dark but good job, 7/10

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    Looks lq and overblended IMO.

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