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    Quote Originally Posted by Clay10 View Post
    The only thing I don't like is the placement of he glowing orbs under his arms.
    I think it would look more natural if they were bigger.
    Nice job, you are improving a lot to

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    Quote Originally Posted by Clay10 View Post
    I agree, but the placement of them is still bad IMO. They could be more towards his hands.
    That would be drawing you away from him though....

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    The drop-off of light between the left and right side looks weird and unnatural.
    Orbs are the only real lighting to blend the render and they are not big enough and a little too much opacity.
    Use some effects to blend the render more.

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    7/10. Personally you should get rid of the orbs cause they are very distracting and instead make one light source coming from the top of the page (which you have). I also think that the bottom C4D sorta wrecks the flow cause it is going in a different direction, could be blended a bit better with a photo filter and all that. This is fairly good though, KIU.

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    I don't think there should be any white balls(orbs) since he has fists. This is very plain and the c4ds that you put in the bg with color dodge dont look that great.

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    Those white dots kill it.
    Try making the effects go towards his direction too.

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    Ok. Ill fix the orb placement and the bottom C4D. (biggrin)
    Thanks for the advice I think Im getting it down.

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    Ok. Ill fix the orb placement and the bottom C4D. (biggrin)
    Thanks for the advice I think Im getting it down!

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