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    Since FrozenFag wouldn't finish it, here it is. We did a collab, he started and I finished. It isn't the best, but whatever. Here's his part:

    http://prntscr.com/lj7zc

    (too lazy to upload)

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    Edit: Lowered opacity on the C4D... It was bugging me.

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    you definitely improved it
    To much black on the sides but other than that I really like it
    also Idk how I feel about that particular c4d infront of him
    nice job man
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    Quote Originally Posted by Goober View Post
    you definitely improved it
    To much black on the sides but other than that I really like it
    also Idk how I feel about that particular c4d infront of him
    nice job man
    8/10
    Ty. And I know, I don't like it either, I use to have something along the lines of this:
    http://prntscr.com/krmz8
    That I was going to finish, BUTTTTTTTT I rage quit and deleted the C4Ds, and can't find them again. Lol.

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    Over all CnC for your works! :3
    -Text doesn't match whatsoever.
    -Some Linear Dodge lighting could be good on those yellow spots.
    -The width seems to big, leaving a lot of unused room.
    -Could be brighter
    -Idk, but I think you used hard mix, doesn't look good.
    -Try using the Color Balance, helps out a bit.
    -Render placement could be better.
    -Effects could be better.
    -Like the choices of colors
    Pretty good, keep on the good work.

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    You gave it back to me ... and ... yeah I absolutely forgot. I was meaning to ask but... derp.
    This one here is different from the part you gave back to me. LOL. I'm sorry.
    Although i like how much brighter you made it. When I gave it to you i think the darkened part on the right was set to "Overlay" or something, because I can see one of the c4d's behind it :< , my fault for sure.

    I should upload what's behind the darkened part, it's a total mess, unless you edited it that is.
    Nice job to you crimz, and me :gusta:

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    I like the improvements you made (no text.. ect)
    But I think you effect whored a little too much.
    8/10 IMO
    KIU Great job

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    Quote Originally Posted by Faux-Vinylography View Post
    Over all CnC for your works! :3
    -Text doesn't match whatsoever.
    -Some Linear Dodge lighting could be good on those yellow spots.
    -The width seems to big, leaving a lot of unused room.
    -Could be brighter
    -Idk, but I think you used hard mix, doesn't look good.
    -Try using the Color Balance, helps out a bit.
    -Render placement could be better.
    -Effects could be better.
    -Like the choices of colors
    Pretty good, keep on the good work.
    Uhh... There is no text..? Are you looking at the right one? Thanks. :3

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    I like it, great use of colors. I would just add some over your render to help blend him in some. 7.5/10

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    Lulz, I tried adding some c4ds in front like someone told me, but it's too difficult. Dx

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    It just needs better blending so it won't have the copy/paste look. Also to get all the colors to match your render get the original sized render and place it a layer above the background and set it to color.

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