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    Text could be a bit better and the BG looks a little weird IMO, light source is good. One of your best tags I think 8/10.

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    Damn man nice improvement
    I think it would look better with out text imo
    keep it up

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    Text.

    Add some more depth. Because everything is just there and it kinda draws attention away from the renders.

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    Updated without text.
    I thought it would look goo with the flow but no.

    GamerProblems I add the depth by making it look like stuff is in front and behind them, its not just there. It is your opinion, so okay.

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    Quote Originally Posted by zSh0x* View Post
    Updated without text.
    I thought it would look goo with the flow but no.

    GamerProblems I add the depth by making it look like stuff is in front and behind them, its not just there. It is your opinion, so okay.
    Looks better without text I hope to see more like this from you.

    @clay I kinda agree that the opacity could be lowered on the light imo

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    Quote Originally Posted by zSh0x* View Post
    GamerProblems I add the depth by making it look like stuff is in front and behind them, its not just there. It is your opinion, so okay.
    That's not really depth, its move of blending everything together.

    Blur the BG for once!!! It will actually help this time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GamerProblems View Post
    That's not really depth, its move of blending everything together.

    Blur the BG for once!!! It will actually help this time.
    Not going to happen, blur does not suit my style.

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    Quote Originally Posted by zSh0x* View Post
    Not going to happen, blur does not suit my style.
    Lower the strength to about 15 and blur and lower the opacity on that layer abit, would draw a bit of attention to the render

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    Quote Originally Posted by GamerProblems View Post
    Lower the strength to about 15 and blur and lower the opacity on that layer abit, would draw a bit of attention to the render
    Not gonna happen, but thanks for the tip

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