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    Default Dat Ass[Art] l Lightning bolt/crossbow

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    Edit/lightened it a bit,and changed font


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    Quote Originally Posted by Clay10 View Post
    Way too dark, can't read the text easily.
    This^

    Font doesn't look good imo. Fix what Clay said and the art would be really good. 6/10.

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    Like Clay said but very nice!

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    Make the vocal be more directed to the girl.
    Also the text
    Otherwise nice effects. Keep it up

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    Looks a ton better 8/10

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    Render needs more blending

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    Render placement is just bad .

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    Love the flow of it man! But it is a bit Dark lighten it up and it will be great 7/10 KIU

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    Remove the text and fix your placement and it will look nice.

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    i had to stare to see what i was looking at.
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