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    Here it is... CnC/10

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    Nice man you are getting better with every sig I see you post
    Here is a text placement tutorial http://www.codeleakers.com/showthrea...ement-Tutorial
    Keep it up

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    Needs blending and flow

    Improve on text and it's placement, try using a different font and use a color from the render (If you can't find a decent spot to put text, don't put any at all)

    If you used motion blur for the duplicate render behind the original, try tweaking the settings because it's not so great.
    Some fractals/c4ds/effects would be good on this tag.

    Lighting needs improvement as well, try darkening the sides with a black soft brush in a new layer and then lower the opacity (bringing focal to the render)

    Also, whatever that thing is behind the text looks sort of weird, try placing it somewhere else.

    Big tip - Use the rule of thirds.

    You are improving though

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    Quote Originally Posted by Goober View Post
    Nice man you are getting better with every sig I see you post
    Here is a text placement tutorial http://www.codeleakers.com/showthrea...ement-Tutorial
    Keep it up
    Thanks man! I am definitly goign to use this.(biggrin)

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    Quote Originally Posted by JROD707 View Post
    Needs blending and flow
    Improve on text and it's placement, try using a different font and use a color from the render (If you can't find a decent spot to put text, don't put any at all)
    If you used motion blur for the duplicate render behind the original, try tweaking the settings because it's not so great.
    Some fractals/c4ds/effects would be good on this tag.
    Lighting needs improvement as well, try darkening the sides with a black soft brush in a new layer and then lower the opacity (bringing focal to the render)
    Also, whatever that thing is behind the text looks sort of weird, try placing it somewhere else.

    Big tip - Use the rule of thirds.
    What is the "Rule of Thirds"?

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    pretty good as goober said ur improving keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tumblez View Post
    What is the "Rule of Thirds"?
    Read : http://www.alibony.com/graphics/def_rule_of_thirds.html

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    Quote Originally Posted by JROD707 View Post
    Ok, now I know what you mean. Thanks I will use this.(biggrin)

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