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    Hey guy's this is the signature i'll be using for my Battle, CnC /10

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    It's good, but it just doesn't have that "Wow" factor so what they say.

    Try changing the color of the text.
    The octopus c4d spam needs to improve on the placement.
    Blur the left side and the bottom right side a bit so the focal attracts to the render.
    And maybe add a light source at the top of the render.
    Needs depth as well.
    7.5/10


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    Looks pretty good. (smile)
    IMO it doesn't need text at all.
    This kills it aswell:

    and add a bit of depth. 7.5/10

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    Okay thanks guys, I'm a try to put more flow and depth the next time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Platinum'sGFX View Post
    Okay thanks guys, I'm a try to put more flow and depth the next time.
    The flow is fine. Just the depth and incorporating the C4Ds (Placement and blending the stripes in)

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    Quote Originally Posted by NizzyArts View Post
    The flow is fine. Just the depth and incorporating the C4Ds (Placement and blending the stripes in)
    Alright thanks man for the advice!

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