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Thread: Squish Art - Sexy
03-02-2013, 08:34 PM #1
Squish Art - Sexy
1st sig in about 2 months so go easy, jks
Sexy Smudge Tag v1 :
Sexy Smudge Tag v2 :
CnC and Rate /10 please (biggrin)
BTW - This tag is free for anyone to take it so just tell me if you are gonna if you want to.
Last edited by Squish.; 03-04-2013 at 09:26 AM.
03-02-2013, 09:31 PM #2
Placement of the render is weird, The dark/black smudge is all over the place(their flow could be better), Could work on adding more lighting effects (like darken and lighten some areas.
03-02-2013, 09:50 PM #3
03-03-2013, 01:41 AM #4
- Join Date
- Sep 2010
In my opinion this is a great piece 8/10
Of course no piece is perfect, but here's my reason why.
First off, the lightning bulb-ish things could vary a bit more, pattern-wise.
Also you could make the colors a bit darker, instead of using yellow use orange.
But this is just my opinion.
Anyway good job!
03-03-2013, 01:46 AM #5
I love it... 9/10...
03-03-2013, 02:44 AM #6
The yellow smudge thing seems random and is out of place, if you had been more direct with it and not random, it could have been great.
There are too much specs also, seems overpowering.
03-03-2013, 03:18 AM #7
I guess Vinyl disliked G4MER's post cause he didn't give proper CnC but thanks anyway but let that be a lesson to you people
@Strike, throughout the whole thing I knew that the flow wasn't gonna be great on this but what do ya do? Just keep trying I guess. I will make another smudge tag, maybe not the same style but it will be smudge and in that tag I will try better with my flow. Thanks for the great feedback guys but can you also rate if possible?
03-03-2013, 03:22 AM #8
I like it dude.
03-03-2013, 03:22 AM #9
03-03-2013, 04:20 AM #10
I like it but Vinyl and Strike said what was need to be said. Not bad for a first in 2 months .