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    Default Smaash dem hos [hulk]

    My first in a very long time.
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    It looks very un neat, the fractals above the Hulk confuzzle my eyes. So work on your focal point dude. I'd give it a 6/10, although it's a little plain.

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    needs better blending and depht and its too dark

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    It's better to leave your focal clean and have your effects coming off or around your focal.

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    Needs a lot more blending, also the c4d thing you have in front of everything doesn't look right, it'd look better if the background was darker 6/10

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    Doesn't really blend, the black kills it, and the placing of the effect(s) is bad.

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