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    Trying out some stuff, haven't really tried learning anything cause I wanna see how much I can do on my own before looking up new things.
    This took me 15 minutes to do, not sure why. Anyway. Just messing around.



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    eh 5/10 i don't like the render for that particular background you used

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nox View Post
    eh 5/10 i don't like the render for that particular background you used
    Agreed, I was trying to find a more destroyed city with fires and such in it; but, I don't have internet on my laptop right now (I'm on my dekstop) so I couldn't search for it. So, I threw a nuked one in there.

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    Doesn't blend but I can see you have the right ideas send me a pm tommorow ill send you some of my psds I got a good feeling about you

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    the render and it needs to blend more

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    Quote Originally Posted by Distortion View Post
    Doesn't blend but I can see you have the right ideas send me a pm tommorow ill send you some of my psds I got a good feeling about you
    Blending is a problem of mine. I'll send you a PM now ;)
    And thanks! (smile)

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    the render and it needs to blend more
    I stumbled across it and thought, "what the hell, sure I'll make an image!"
    And yeah, agreed

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    This really just looks like a copy and past IMO try looking up some tuts they can only help.

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    I like the concept you tried making here.

    I'd suggest choosing a different background that fits in with this type of render.

    For the blue effect, since everything is mostly red, I think you should try changing it to a red-ish color. The pen tooling around the sword needs to be improved as well - Doesn't seem to have the 'wow' factor to it. Looks like you lower the opacity on it, try putting it back to 100% if so. All the effects are nice and so, but the background is what kills it. Preferably find a background that has a firey, explosion like theme.

    For the text, try bringing it closer the focal. Try making it a bit smaller as well. Since you have space on the sides, either change your canvas size and lower the dimensions on the width or add some side borders. Also, try adding light around the canvas to brighten things up and make it stand more. By doing so, grab a soft brush and make the size a reasonably big size and brush softly around the edges of the canvas.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RED 58 View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by JROD View Post
    I like the concept you tried making here.


    I'd suggest choosing a different background that fits in with this type of render.


    For the blue effect, since everything is mostly red, I think you should try changing it to a red-ish color. The pen tooling around the sword needs to be improved as well - Doesn't seem to have the 'wow' factor to it. Looks like you lower the opacity on it, try putting it back to 100% if so. All the effects are nice and so, but the background is what kills it. Preferably find a background that has a firey, explosion like theme.


    For the text, try bringing it closer the focal. Try making it a bit smaller as well. Since you have space on the sides, either change your canvas size and lower the dimensions on the width or add some side borders. Also, try adding light around the canvas to brighten things up and make it stand more. By doing so, grab a soft brush and make the size a reasonably big size and brush softly around the edges of the canvas.
    Well, this image background was explained before so.
    But I maybe will do another image tomorrow. I'll see. I will defiantly take your advice. Thanks! (smile)

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