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Thread: Gfx "Attempt" - Pulse
05-09-2013, 05:41 AM #1
Gfx "Attempt" - Pulse
Got the stock from Coexist's RRC#1 challenge in a very old thread. Probably isn't very good, but I was just trying to make something. Don't kill me with criticism please. I'm still learning.
Link to render: http://www.codeleakers.com/showthread.php?52493-RRC-1
Last edited by Converse; 05-09-2013 at 05:41 AM. Reason: Added link
05-09-2013, 06:37 AM #2
It's a bit big, but I like it.
05-09-2013, 07:05 AM #3
05-09-2013, 11:41 AM #4
- Join Date
- May 2011
- Where the Green Grass Grows. <3
Pretty good, however I think the lighting could be a tad better. Also try and use gradient maps on the background/render to get your colors more matching. I'd also change the grey border to transparent. Other then that, it looks very nice. Maybe try some effects around/in front of/behind the render? Just something to add on. Keep it up.
05-09-2013, 12:22 PM #5
i like the " color smudging ", the render looks weird around the edges in my eyes but overall nice
05-09-2013, 03:44 PM #6
You know how I do. :p I like the smudging, not so much the pop out. Also I would add a gradient map to work with blending a little more.
05-09-2013, 04:17 PM #7
Make the render blend in with background. Better Text Placement. Add ligtning. Better border.
05-09-2013, 06:38 PM #8
Peace, Love, and Positivity
- Join Date
- Aug 2011
- Playboy Mansion
-Blend the render with the background.
-Get rid of that grey bg
-Work with that pop-out effect
-Presumably lower the dimensions for this tag since most space is not used
-Bring text closer to focal
05-10-2013, 06:07 AM #9
I need help with blending. I'm not very good at it. Could somebody please assist me?