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    Are all 3 tags made recently or are you not taking any time. It seems as if you put a render on the background and blurred or distorted it all. Correct?

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    Too Blurry you need to take your time and its dark

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    Uhm.... Look at this:

    http://imm.io/16rKE

    Black = UNBLUR! Never distort the focal, it messes the tag up, unless you REALLY know what you're doing (like you need photoshop level: Josh to accomplish this)

    Red = Semi-blur. Just a small 1 or 2 px gaussian blur here, IF THAT. You messed the depth up here. It makes her look like her body is way closer then her face. You just want the focal to be like so:
    Main focus = Unblurred, sharpened A TAD.
    Expanding away from focus = getting less sharpened, a TAD blurred. DO NOT BLUR TO THE POINT THAT SOMEONE CAN TELL YOU BLURRED IT. You can see it, trust me.

    Purple = Don't distort the background unless you have a good render and stock for it. It didn't work in this case. If you were trying to go with the flow of the render, you messed that up. :c

    Blue = Darkened. In this case, I would have horizontally flipped the stock so that the light source matches with the render. The light source doesn't have to go with the flow, it just has to match the render.

    Green = Lighten. Lighten just barely though. Light sources are REALLY EASY to over do. The problem is, you can't see it when you do it, but when someone else sees it they see it majorly.

    Cyan = Wtf? What happened to her head? Lol.

    This is improvement, none the less. You're improving pretty briskly, just keep at it and you'll be there in no time. Also, remember to look at tutorials. There's no shame in learning from others, something I took a while to figure out. Alright tag, keep it up. If you ever need anything, feel free to PM me.

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