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    Border is weird and the left arm is blurred too much.

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    Alright. Thanks for your help Kyle.

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    Work on the text, border, and blending(make arm fade less noticably). Also try using some gradient maps.

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    That font. Gimme.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Josh View Post
    That font. Gimme.
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    Like others have said, fix the border. The C4D behind is a bit distracting. Turn the brightness down a tad.

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    Thanks for the advice!

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    fix the border and text its brighter towards the left than any other spot

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    The main things I see that need work on this is blending, color balance, and text placement.

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