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    Default SHOCKWAVE GFX

    I never post anything as far as GFX here. So, I figured there is always a first. Lets see how the criticism goes.

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    I like it! Only thing is the blackness around text is what I do not like to much. I am just getting back into PS my self so I don't have much say but those are my opinions.
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    Looks nice. I don't see any reason to say anything bad about it. Great job.

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    Appreciated.

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    Looks to me as if you have too many focals, The text is a little off and should compliment the focal so you don't have to take your eyes off the focal to read it. Also I would remove the icon in the background because it isn't a effect or the literal background, and the size is a little weird to me. I would use something around 450x200 for this tag. I would also add more effects with the color of the eye, the color balance is off by having all that grey and that circle of orange. Just my CnC not trying to be rude but just going in depth to help you improve.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vintage View Post
    Looks to me as if you have too many focals, The text is a little off and should compliment the focal so you don't have to take your eyes off the focal to read it. Also I would remove the icon in the background because it isn't a effect or the literal background, and the size is a little weird to me. I would use something around 450x200 for this tag. I would also add more effects with the color of the eye, the color balance is off by having all that grey and that circle of orange. Just my CnC not trying to be rude but just going in depth to help you improve.
    I appreciate the criticism Vintage. That is why I posted it yesterday. The Icon was an after thought to fill some empty space. For some reason I tend to migrate to black and white alot, don't know why. I like the text, but I see your reason as far as taking your eye away from the focal. Thanks for the input, will put it all to use on next one.

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    I like them but the text is off... not bad though 7/10

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