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    Default Smudge Signature By Goober

    I got some opinions and advice for this smudge ill apply them to my next smudge though, I just asked for them a bit to late. So thanks to those who shared there ideas with me.

    Anyways this is a style I have always wanted to get really good at. I envy those who have mastered smudging. So this is my first attempt of many more, to hopefully become a decent smudger at one point.



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    This is a very good job. The text is very good 9/10

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    Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful imo. Colors Great job overall. I'll try and CnC better tomorrow .

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    The yellow looks too strong, is it liner dodged? I don't know, but the blue clouds inside the smudge, looks off and out of placed. The colors are weird. Text kind of bothers me. There is no major focal point, and the could be a better lighting, like using the black round brush or the burn tool. Looks rad.

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    The yellow seems overpowering, and I would drop the text down a little bit and to the left where the pink is.

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    Quote Originally Posted by vynk View Post
    The yellow looks too strong, is it liner dodged? I don't know, but the blue clouds inside the smudge, looks off and out of placed. The colors are weird. Text kind of bothers me. There is no major focal point, and the could be a better lighting, like using the black round brush or the burn tool. Looks rad.
    I think it was but maybe it looks to strong is because after that I did a b/w gradient set to color dodge and erased all the areas I thought were to bright, but that definitely had an added effect on the yellow. Text bothers me to but I am going to keep working on it.

    Quote Originally Posted by vynk View Post
    Looks rad.
    Thanks man! it means a lot

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