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    Hey guys to new signatures, Guardian is from yesterday and I just finished Halo so CnC /10 For both thanks guys!



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    20/20 Good Job!

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    Guardian depth is messed up a bit, the dark C4D's don't blend well IMO, the lighting is off, and it's a tad too bright. KIU though. Looks good.

    Halo text is bad, the splatters don't blend (try clipping masks next time) and the lighting is messed up. Render too bright, background all dark except under his arm, keep it up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Austin. View Post
    Guardian depth is messed up a bit, the dark C4D's don't blend well IMO, the lighting is off, and it's a tad too bright. KIU though. Looks good.

    Halo text is bad, the splatters don't blend (try clipping masks next time) and the lighting is messed up. Render too bright, background all dark except under his arm, keep it up.
    It is clipped masked, and I know I wanted to try something with the text, but non the less thanks for the feedback man!

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    HALO TAG
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    ~The text goes very poor with what I think you were trying to do
    ~Has some nice depth but the Gun fire doesn't blend very well.
    ~ looks pretty strange.
    ~Very good use of the C4D bubbles on the right side
    Overall 8.5/10
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    ~The render is poorly to not blended at all. Some parts are worse than others
    ~Again, nice use of the bubbles.
    ~The font I have a love hate feeling. Some letters look good and some look odd
    Overall 7.5/10

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    You must not have clipped it onto something very bright. The purpose of clip masking splatters would be to give it a color other then black/white that would blend with the signature. Anytime.

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    1st one 8/10 2nd one 9/10 Good work. The first one can be lightened up a bit

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    The colors are not especially vibtrant in each signature. Eslecially the guardian signature. The colors could have looked alot better being saturated and would have finished with a more standing out signature.

    The lighting is great on the halo signature. Though work with dodge and burn to make better contrasts and not look like flat soft brushes being used or gradients. It brings focus to objects like visor by brushing over and then you can darken aspects of the shuit and background. It produces a great finish when used right lighting wise.

    You have great blending where it looks right for the signature and fit in well. Though the arm in halo is too darl compared to rest, it looks off. Though the effects used arent blatant c4d's on linear dodge for example. Which is somrthing to admire.

    The text on guardian signature is fine but could be shrunk and moved closer to the render but thats just nit picking.

    Good work, to artists standard.

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    Thanks everyone for the feedback it means a lot to me, and it really helps out!

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    Considering I haven't slept at all and I won't be for a while then it might look weird but I'll give a better CNC later.

    Halo:
    -Seems so white while the background is dark. Needs more curves or something to bring out both of those features.
    -Lighting fits perfectly but it needs to be alot better considering that you could bring the render out better with some more of it NOT TOO MUCH.
    -Lower the opacity on the soft brush just a tad. (Where the splash on the top is.)
    -Text Placement could be better.

    Guardian: (Send me the render to this.)
    -Wayy too blurry in the background
    -Render doesn't blend in
    -C4Ds behind it kill it
    -Text placement is too far off
    -Way to vibrant could use some levels and a green/orange/purple gradient map, the default one and set it to soft light with the opacity at about 50.

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