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    Decided to make a naruto by seeing ryans and slinks i guess now... the text i think is ehh idk im horrible with text and the lighting on the lower hand is weird but yeah.... CnC/10

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    The render is good man. The background is too dark. You need to lighten up the text too

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    8/10
    Did a great job but you need you fix the background his body looks like it camoflage to the background

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    Too dark try lighting it up.

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    6.5/10

    To dark, needs some lighting in it.

    Text isn't good.

    Keep it up.

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    Alright thanks for the feedback guys!

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    Its just too dark imo. But besides that it looks good 7/10

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    I actually like this concept you tried doing here, but you can improve to make this 10x better.
    -Text placement needs to be imrpoved. Try moving it closer to the focal, and use the rule of thirds for placing.
    -Try lowering your dimensions for signatures, around 450x250 max. (I'll gaurantee you'll get better results).
    -Don't over-sharpen your render, it makes it look weird and pixely.
    -Make your BG interesting and blur the sides when you think some of the stuff isn't necessary (bringing depth to render).

    But yeah, man keep going at it. Look at more tutorials and you'll improve in no time !

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    Quote Originally Posted by JROD7oh7 View Post
    I actually like this concept you tried doing here, but you can improve to make this 10x better.
    -Text placement needs to be imrpoved. Try moving it closer to the focal, and use the rule of thirds for placing.
    -Try lowering your dimensions for signatures, around 450x250 max. (I'll gaurantee you'll get better results).
    -Don't over-sharpen your render, it makes it look weird and pixely.
    -Make your BG interesting and blur the sides when you think some of the stuff isn't necessary (bringing depth to render).

    But yeah, man keep going at it. Look at more tutorials and you'll improve in no time !
    Thanks man and i am... thanks for all the tips! and thanks to ricky

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