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    Default Basic Tag | Death The Kid From Soul Eater

    Now, I'll admit, I didn't do much to make this one. It's really basic, more basic than what I do nowadays.

    Anyways, the text positioning was the only trouble I had (making it readable to where no one has to look closer or squinch their eyes to read it clearly). Anyways, here's the outcome:





    CnC if you want. I really like this one, just because Death The Kid is badass.

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    Decent job. Lighten it up a lil bit. Its too dark. The text can be better. The flow is off a lil bit

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    No flow, decent blending, herp text, 6/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tenza View Post
    No flow, decent blending, herp text, 6/10
    Lol, herp text. That's what I thought.

    Thanks for the feedback guys. Really means a lot to me <3

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    Text positioning is bad, as well as the execution of the text. There's no light source, and he doesn't look like he belongs on that background. The render has white around it that doesn't blend very well, and it looks squished. Keep at it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Austin . View Post
    Text positioning is bad, as well as the execution of the text. There's no light source, and he doesn't look like he belongs on that background. The render has white around it that doesn't blend very well, and it looks squished. Keep at it.
    I knew the lighting around the render would be bad

    I did the best with the text positioning.. but yeah.

    I guess i didn't put enough lighting... I did just a little though..


    Thanks for the feedback, bro <3

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    Render looks stretched.
    The white around the render also looks bad.

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    As Retro said looks stretched to me. Anyways doesn't blend to well and flow isn't that bad. Keep up the work Slink.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Retro View Post
    Render looks stretched.
    The white around the render also looks bad.
    I realize this.

    The white around the render looks bad. I might fix that up when I get the chance.

    Thanks for the feedback.

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