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    Default Squishy Art - Entrepreneur (SOTW Entry)

    Was in a hurry to get something done for SOTW and this was the result.
    I personally liked it, think it turned out ok.





    CnC and Rates are welcomed and much appreciated !

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    Text is a bit hard to see.
    Lower the opacity on the white brush/Light source you placed over the render.

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    To much lighting in the center. You can barely see the text. It looks overall good though.


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    I like everything except the a-bit-too-overwhelming bright spot in the middle.

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    Really bright in the middle try lower the opacity or putting it on soft light.

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    Everything is really nice minus the middle it's way to bright. Keep it up though Squishy.

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    Thanks guys, updated with the middle less bright

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    /Bump... wouldn't mind some more CnC

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    /bump. Didn't get much cnc at all on this and wouldn't mind some more.

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    Good job 9/10

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