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    So heres my newest tag, ive been trying to work text and some other.... but yeah any advice would be great thanks i know i messed up with the pop out idk everytime i would do image>apply image it would get all messy at the top :/


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    Should've placed the render in the center and shouldn't have erased.
    I like how you are already focusing on text, keep it up.
    Try to add more effects behind and over the render, this will make it look more catchy.

    Work on depth, with either the curves tool and/or lightning effects.

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    Depth needs some work, like Tenza said.
    Those marks at the top above the main signature box, were those missed parts that you meant to erase? Just pointing that out.
    The text behind "Zombie Man" either 1) Needs to change color and font so it's easier to see and read or 2) Be removed all together. I know it's a signature so it's going to be small, but that's my opinion on the text. It's to bright overall. It's really bright, darken it up. Also you either need to 1) Add some more to fill up some of that extra space 2) Scale the render up or 3) Rearrange the sig to have less empty space.
    Last thing, the purple items. What are those? They seem...random.
    Overall, it's not bad though.
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    bad render placement. The text is bad and that white stuff under the big text throws it off. Keep at it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tenza View Post
    Should've placed the render in the center and shouldn't have erased.
    I like how you are already focusing on text, keep it up.
    Try to add more effects behind and over the render, this will make it look more catchy.

    Work on depth, with either the curves tool and/or lightning effects.
    Alright will do thanks
    Quote Originally Posted by Coldfire202 View Post
    Depth needs some work, like Tenza said.
    Those marks at the top above the main signature box, were those missed parts that you meant to erase? Just pointing that out.
    The text behind "Zombie Man" either 1) Needs to change color and font so it's easier to see and read or 2) Be removed all together. I know it's a signature so it's going to be small, but that's my opinion on the text. It's to bright overall. It's really bright, darken it up. Also you either need to 1) Add some more to fill up some of that extra space 2) Scale the render up or 3) Rearrange the sig to have less empty space.
    Last thing, the purple items. What are those? They seem...random.
    Overall, it's not bad though.
    6/10
    yeah i see what you mean ill work on that thanks and the purple things were some fractals guess not the right ones to choose? :/
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    bad render placement. The text is bad and that white stuff under the big text throws it off. Keep at it
    yeah... and thanks for the advice everyone

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