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    Default Dragon Ball Z smudge~ Trying that text

    Well im trying to work with text so i gave it a shot i feel like a i failed :P anyway any advice?




    V2 with smaller subtext

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    The text isn't that bad, but could be worked on. It's better than anything I could do.

    As for the work, I feel the borders are too thick. The lower right of the smudge looks really unnatural. His left bicep ( from goku's perspective) is oversmudged imo.

    Overall I give it a 7/10. Keep it up dude.

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    Not Bad! 7/10 Love everything from the smudge,to the flow,to the color.

    My Complaints:
    -Border too big. (I recommend putting the stroke on inside; 1)
    -Too Blurry (You can always lower the opacity on that)
    -Render could use some more sharpening. (Not alot though don't overdo it like you did the blur
    -Text [Color,Placement,and Font need work] (Try Putting the text closer and making it fit in with the color scheme)
    -Too much subtext or its just too big.
    -Don't like how you smudged Goku's left knee and hand kinda ruins it a tad. (Always erasable)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Deadry View Post
    The text isn't that bad, but could be worked on. It's better than anything I could do.

    As for the work, I feel the borders are too thick. The lower right of the smudge looks really unnatural. His left bicep ( from goku's perspective) is oversmudged imo.

    Overall I give it a 7/10. Keep it up dude.
    I see what you mean thanks
    Quote Originally Posted by Nizzy View Post
    Not Bad! 7/10 Love everything from the smudge,to the flow,to the color.

    My Complaints:
    -Border too big. (I recommend putting the stroke on inside; 1)
    -Too Blurry (You can always lower the opacity on that)
    -Render could use some more sharpening. (Not alot though don't overdo it like you did the blur
    -Text [Color,Placement,and Font need work] (Try Putting the text closer and making it fit in with the color scheme)
    -Too much subtext or its just too big.
    -Don't like how you smudged Goku's left knee and hand kinda ruins it a tad. (Always erasable)
    Yeah, will do thanks for advice

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