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11-06-2013, 04:59 PM #1
Dragon Ball Z smudge~ Trying that text
Well im trying to work with text so i gave it a shot i feel like a i failed :P anyway any advice?
V2 with smaller subtext
Last edited by Illusion; 11-06-2013 at 05:55 PM.
11-06-2013, 05:24 PM #2
The text isn't that bad, but could be worked on. It's better than anything I could do.
As for the work, I feel the borders are too thick. The lower right of the smudge looks really unnatural. His left bicep ( from goku's perspective) is oversmudged imo.
Overall I give it a 7/10. Keep it up dude.
11-06-2013, 05:27 PM #3
Not Bad! 7/10 Love everything from the smudge,to the flow,to the color.
-Border too big. (I recommend putting the stroke on inside; 1)
-Too Blurry (You can always lower the opacity on that)
-Render could use some more sharpening. (Not alot though don't overdo it like you did the blur
-Text [Color,Placement,and Font need work] (Try Putting the text closer and making it fit in with the color scheme)
-Too much subtext or its just too big.
-Don't like how you smudged Goku's left knee and hand kinda ruins it a tad. (Always erasable)
11-06-2013, 05:44 PM #4
11-06-2013, 05:55 PM #5
added V2 with smaller sub text