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    Default [Smudge] Jahan Yousaf

    So, the really hard part of doing this was rendering Jahan.
    So, I just ended up using the Lasso tool.
    CnC?


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    The text is a killer. The smudging around here was a good idea, however it kind of messes with the flow of things. I realize it's black and white, but it's still missing a change in tone; i.e. make some of the dark parts lighter, etc. Add a light source, and I would've made her bigger. But the main problem I have with this signature; there is no action. A lot of times, renders can have no action going on and it'll look alright, but smudging needs something that really makes it look good - whether it be her hand stretched out or what, it gives it something to go from/to. Kind of like how in music, if every note had the same dynamic (all really loud/soft,) You probably wouldn't get as much delight in it, as compared to the song having Crescendos and Decrescendos; the volume increasing and decreasing. Hard to explain. Eh. But overall, good attempt. Keep at it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Austin . View Post
    The text is a killer. The smudging around here was a good idea, however it kind of messes with the flow of things. I realize it's black and white, but it's still missing a change in tone; i.e. make some of the dark parts lighter, etc. Add a light source, and I would've made her bigger. But the main problem I have with this signature; there is no action. A lot of times, renders can have no action going on and it'll look alright, but smudging needs something that really makes it look good - whether it be her hand stretched out or what, it gives it something to go from/to. Kind of like how in music, if every note had the same dynamic (all really loud/soft,) You probably wouldn't get as much delight in it, as compared to the song having Crescendos and Decrescendos; the volume increasing and decreasing. Hard to explain. Eh. But overall, good attempt. Keep at it.
    Thanks Austin!
    I will work on that for my next smudge.
    Very much appreciated!

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    the flow is off. not bad though. keep at it

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    Yasmine>>>Jahan

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    Quote Originally Posted by xDakotaxDCB View Post
    Yasmine>>>Jahan
    I wanted CnC on Jahan so My Yasmine smudge would be better.

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    I don't like it. I don't see much work put into this.

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