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    Default Captain America | Smudge


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    Let me know which is better. Im trying to work on my text. Also let me know if you think there is anything that looks bad to you! Thanks

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    4/10, It's too basic, and the text doesn't match the image.

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    Thats why i posted the one without the Text

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    Not bad. Just the render is lq. Next time, make the text smaller. Font would proboably look a lot better if it were smaller lol.

    Keept at it man

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    Nice job, but yeah the one without text is better, also try to blend the render into the background... i see that you smudged him a little bit, but smudge him with flow of your smudge
    if your going to smudge him in! but keep it up !

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    1) Render is LQ
    2) Render looks stretched
    3) Needs to be lighter
    4) Text doesn't match at all
    5) Smudge needs some work

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    render is lq. Text is bad. Flow is off, not bad. keep at it

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