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    The pupil looks off-centered to me but its pretty good man

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    Now draw the other eye

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beaver View Post
    Now draw the other eye
    Fuck off

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    this is EXACTLY what my visual arts teacher would say,

    your shading around the eye is too splochy, you can still see the cartoonish outlines, the eye brow goes back in distance at full gradation, the pupil is off a tiny bit, and your line weight is too dark.

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    Quote Originally Posted by zTwist-MoDz View Post
    this is EXACTLY what my visual arts teacher would say,

    your shading around the eye is too splochy, you can still see the cartoonish outlines, the eye brow goes back in distance at full gradation, the pupil is off a tiny bit, and your line weight is too dark.
    Who invited you to my post?

    But here is something your art teacher you don't have would say.


    Realistic drawings are all about light and dark since I'm not coloring. I checked it with my art teacher and he said the only thing wrong was my roundness. And he told me to get 9H pencil. And to be better with centering

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    did you use a normal pencil to do this or a 2B?

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    Quote Originally Posted by zTwist-MoDz View Post
    this is EXACTLY what my visual arts teacher would say,

    your shading around the eye is too splochy, you can still see the cartoonish outlines, the eye brow goes back in distance at full gradation, the pupil is off a tiny bit, and your line weight is too dark.
    Step aside we got zTwist here. No honestly though it doesn't look bad at all, it looks really good the pupil is a bit of centered, and the shading could be a little better but other then that man keep up the amazing work hope to see more from you soon!

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    Stop rejecting someone's constructive criticism just because you don't like that person. There are issues with it. The eyelashes, for one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 001 View Post
    did you use a normal pencil to do this or a 2B?
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    Stop rejecting someone's constructive criticism just because you don't like that person. There are issues with it. The eyelashes, for one.
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