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    Default {Poem} The hood is down

    The 2nd verse is Garbage!!! I didn't feel like fixing it up since its like 12 at night being tired.
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    NOTE! This isn't the final revision, meaning there are still errors as punctuation, story, structure, ETC




    The hood is down
    Whatever happened to this side of town
    We get no visitors, the mail man won't even make his rounds
    This once good neighborhood, gotten so out of bounds
    Daylight to Nightlight constant gun sounds
    Every block is surround by Niggas that hell bound
    Got little kids afraid to go play on the playground
    Its sad what my neighborhood has become, They thinking violence is the outcome to solve their problem
    They terrorize the streets, immobilize the weak, Idolize the lies rappers speak
    Fantasize about blasting someone with the heat, but cry and snitch when face with defeat
    Where are the leaders to lead theses sheeps, wheres the mentors
    to strengthen these minds that's weak
    I wonder what my old friends doing now
    I haven't seen my team ever since they was caught up with the lifestyle
    I wonder if they ever'ed ponder, thinking was it even worth while
    Just to think how everyone and everything in the hood was supreme
    Now when i drive by all I see is abandoned homes, fragile lives and shattered dreams
    This is why I frown when I ride around my hometown
    seeing how quickly the hood has fallen down

    The neighborhoods of this inner city was once pretty
    Fast forward: now the Hoods are looking gritty
    Every block is hot, riots in every spot, bodies starting to drop, cops not even on the watch
    But here's the real trouble
    Business's that used to bubble are now burnt down in the rubble
    Damn they just killed another man's hustle, now he's caught in the struggle
    The store owner is yelling "Why me", while on Live TV
    As white America is watching this happening, and laughing at the foolish catastrophe
    saying {Quote} "I don't get it!
    this is what they brought to themselves than anyone else
    Some black people always Yell black lives matter, when actuality they create their own disaster
    They seem to never march when one constantly kill their own
    But when another race does it they wanna throw stones, pout and moan,
    Now you can't tell me that shit Ain't logically wrong
    Really, and they expect us to take them seriously
    They would see my intellect as disrespect and Neglect the message i'm trying to dialect
    Some Black people would read this but wont get it, Just would wrongly depicted
    This is why cops harasses them while minding their business at the store
    Give Whites Rights to call them baboons, monkeys and niggers even more
    I seen so much with these eyes
    You'll be surprised how one little street can swallow so many lives



    Bless the mic for the GODS

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    do you have an extra chromosome or something

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    srs.

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    Truffle butter on ya pussy

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    First let me hop out the muh fucking porche

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    Quote Originally Posted by Drugs View Post
    lol thats my account

    I posted the lyrics but i cant annotate yet sadly

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cornerpath2 View Post
    lol thats my account

    I posted the lyrics but i cant annotate yet sadly
    Lol bullshit, but whatever lets you sleep better at night

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    Quote Originally Posted by Drugs View Post
    Lol bullshit, but whatever lets you sleep better at night
    Lol c'mon shift you know I never took and claim anything that's isn't mines

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cornerpath2 View Post
    Lol c'mon shift you know I never took and claim anything that's isn't mines
    Oh ya, you're the crazy religious douchebag. That's right.

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